Laurel chances, lip reading trances
She spins a web, I am tied
Sultry dances, exchanging glances
I must have her in ways unspoken
A string is plucked, a bottom lip sucked
We tarry all night and day
© Sayer Teller

Laurel chances, lip reading trances
She spins a web, I am tied
Sultry dances, exchanging glances
I must have her in ways unspoken
A string is plucked, a bottom lip sucked
We tarry all night and day
© Sayer Teller
Yes. Nice. Contrasts – laurel chance… lip sucked. Imagery. yes.
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Thank you, Jane. Appreciate the feedback.
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